You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Enter VDux's Happy Haiku Contest and Win 1.5 SBDsView the full contextView the direct parentvdux (61)in #contest • 6 years ago Thank you! I agree. Can you change the last line to 5 syllables?
Yes. I guess I thought fleeting was flee -t- ing. 😂
The first line has only four syllables.
Nicely done, in any case. ;-)
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