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RE: New Contest from @Xpilar 7/11-2017 "get free upvote"

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A grandfather stands on a lightning hill while watching the sun rise. The grandfather was named Gabel, he was often called Mr. Gabel. He dressed in a witch, and watched the rising sun shaped like a ball but more like a ball and shaped 3 dimensional. Gabel knows that if the sun rises in such shape, then a sign of a hero will be born. He stood on the hill Lightning because he was waiting for someone who asked for his help.

Then came a man named Woody, to ask for help to Gabel. "Mr. Gabel. I ask for help to you, my wife is pregnant! ", Then Gabel replied," All right. I'm going to help you. "Gabel went to the man's house in Flower by climbing a Lan (a big, fanged and strong but tame and running cat, just in the fiction world).

Upon reaching Flower, at Woody's house, Gabel goes down and uses his magic. Then a bright and blinding light appeared. When the light began to fade, only a fairy woman with a baby boy appeared. Woody is glad her baby has been born. Gabel knows that the baby is a hero, Gabel conceal it unnoticed by someone. Then Woody named his baby Nilbo Woods.

One day, Minaro troops gathered, their numbers thousands, they would pound the whole place. The troops were Baltorn's army, the king of evil and greedy. They are human beings, but do not like creatures other than humans like Elves and Dwarves live side by side with them. But some people are good and love to live side by side with Elves and Dwarves.

The sound of a trumpet sounds and Baltorn begins to attack all over the place and also kills humans who live side by side with Elves and Dwarves. Gabel, who is a wizard from the human race, he brought and hid Nilbo Woods, because Mother and Father had died from the attack.

Gabel lived on the Hill of Lightning, which remained firm and never destroyed at all, where Gabel stood with Nilbo with his young wife. Gabel will take care of Nilbo until he grows up, so he can become a hero someday.

One day, when Nilbo was an adult, he never left home and was less sociable. Gabel always scolded her but she still loved him. Then Gabel took Nilbo to a place far from others. Gabel teaches Nilbo to fight with the sword. At first Nilbo was still afraid of swords, and in the end he was good at using swords.

Gabel orders Nilbo to go to the Minaro Kingdom. But Nilbo refused, because he was alone and felt ashamed of his lack of association. Gabel also gave a dwarf friend named Laton who would accompany Nilbo and protect him from harm, but Nilbo still refused. Then Gabel gave two friends of Elves and Humans. The fairy named Lart and the man named Kurt. And Nilbo went with his friends to the Minaro Kingdom.

When they reached the Minaro Bridge, they were besieged by the orcs, the people who were pounding all over the place and finally cursed into Orcs. Because Nilbo and his friends were forced, they fell into the river Alfer to escape. But the orcs were still chasing them overland. Then there was a group of fairy warriors who saved them.

They were taken to the fairy area. There they are treated with food and drink. Among them, only Nilbo alone will not eat. Nilbo just sat and said nothing, then Laton called him, "Nilbo. Let's eat. Later you will be hungry ", replied Nilbo," Oh. Yes yes. I'll eat later. "

When Nilbo goes to eat, Nilbo accidentally bumps into a beautiful Elven woman who brings a lot of fruit, the fruit becomes messy. Nilbo then picked up all the fruit and apologized to the fairy woman. But the fairy woman was even stunned to see Nilbo. "Hey. Miss. Are you okay?". The Elves answered, "I'm fine." They smiled at each other.
When night came, the sound of trumpets of Orcs would attack the Elves. Nilbo gets up and wakes up all his friends. Mort, the commander of the Elves, began to attack, and the arrows began to fly. The war began to fuss and attack each other. Nilbo and his friends bring a fairy society to hide. And finally in the battle the Orc Minaro won.

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Thank you for your good story @ummi