In the abandoned house, I found my young daughter; her hair was gray, and she had a fixed smile that lacked any human emotion. Her eyes were not her own, but two mirrors looking back at me; a man with a hatchet was ever-so-slowly approaching me.
Edit: changes to the first post.
Very trippy, man. Whatever happens with the contest, it would be interesting if you expand this into a full on short story, or even a longer flash fiction.
Thank you very much. I haven talked written many stories but if there is a short story one maybe I would haha
Haha I see. You just need the right motivation ;)
Thanks for entering bro, appreciate your creativity. Very creepy, I can picture it now
Hahah.... Tried to think of a description versus a situation. I describe and then you determine the outcome.
Yeah it was a unique and nice attempt bro. In order for your entry to be valid you must follow my other account @peacemaker, otherwise you cannot be selected as the potential winner.
Appreciate the heads up. Will do man!
Thanks!
Made a change to the first one...let me know the rules about that.
Edit: a good grammatical catch!
it's all good, edit however you feel, I will accept the entry what it says, but any changes after the deadline will not be considered
Yeah only one entry, delete whichever one you want me not to consider. I always edit my stuff when i can
deleting the first. I like some parts in the first...but yeah...going with the flow.