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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #8: 199 words-10SBD prize pool!

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My entry

https://steemit.com/content/@promisengr/buried-alive

Buried Alive
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promisengr 38 in content
It all start on a rainy weekend, with the usual confrontation of the two step brothers John and Adams, over the rite to inherit their late father’s properties .Things soon got out of hands and threats were promised. As the story goes, John decided to take matters into his hand, and took over the said properties. Adams won’t have it, sprayed John with curare powder with causes prolonged paralysis which was mistaken for actual death.

After the hastened burial, the undertakers were said to have heard finds scratching and thumping sounds which they ignored as animal sounds. Barely a week after the burial, there was a reported failed grave robbery at the site. buried-sf.jpg

Then the horrible sited of the now properly deceased John, who has visibly clawed at the coffin after regaining motor functions had his fingernails pulled off and hands in a horrific pose as his last attempts to claw out were futile. The horror was magnified as it was observed that his entrails were hanging out and part of his gentiles nibbled away by rodents. What’s more, he was actually alive through this but couldn’t reach those part of his body due to the coffin enclosure!!!!!!

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@promisengr.. This story sounds like one of the episodes from 'a thousand ways to die' good one nonetheless..