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RE: New Contest from @Xpilar 4/11-2017 "get free upvote"

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One day, Nico invite friends to go berjelajah to Forest camp to uncover the mystery of frequent in there. there are lots of his friends who agree with the plan and want to go go venture with him. they are a friend school. they are Nico, Tania, corn, dira, Zahra, beautiful, Rudi, ratih, Lily, andri, Mita, Robby and tyas.

The next morning three of them twelve go to the Forest campsites it. they go there with up the bus and the led by Nico. once to close the Forest, they down because there is no bus lines to get into the Woods. they walk into the Woods with led by Nico "the professor".

After bit far they walk, Nico also forgot to the direction of where for lead to the campground. because Nico forget route to the campground, they lost and wrong path to the abyss. after they approached the abyss, Nico and his friends don't know if in front of him there abyss. so that makes Nico slip and fall into abyss. his friends was soon help Nico and Nico can finally up to the top. because of the events Nico very fear so that he turned into a book. ago Tania immediately take the book and bring it.

Because it was almost late at night, they rested. While going to bed Dira was hungry because from morning he had not eaten. Then Rudi gave his food to Dira and accompanied Dira. After that they all slept very soundly.

The next day, they all wake up from his sleep. Tania realizes that three of her friends are not with them, that is Ayu, Ratih, and Mita. Then Tania invites her friends to look for Ayu, Ratih, and Mita. Panicked and in a hurry they were not aware that Risa and Dira were left in the place. When a little distance they just realized that Risa and Dira left. Then they hurried back to their retreat.

After arriving there, it turns out Risa and Dira are not there. They immediately look for Risa and Dira until they find a remote village in the middle of the forest. Then they ask for help to the residents to find their lost friends. Then the residents offered one of the houses for which they rested during their friend's search.

After nightfall, they all fall asleep because tomorrow they will return to find their lost friends. Except for Tania, Tania can not sleep because of her lost friends.

Suddenly Tania heard a group of people talking about their evil plans to kill Tania and her friends. Tania is shocked to hear the people's evil plans talk to them. Then Tania immediately ran to her sleeping friends and woke her slowly. After they all woke up Tania immediately told about what he heard earlier. They were all surprised at what Tania had told her. And finally they make plans to trap people who have a bad plan to them. They all agreed to trap residents by giving up one of their friends to be bait that is Tyas.

The next day, they run their plans to trap citizens. first, they farewell to citizens to the streets and look for their friends missing. they ask people to keep tyas which are sleeping because exhaustion. after that they hide and lurking what will be made citizens to tyas.

After a while they lurking citizens, they see if people bring tyas outside the House the force and bring it to a place. and it turned out that place is a place to make tumbal. arriving in that place, citizen killing tyas before be tumbal. seeing that Tania and his friends screaming hysterical, so make people know if Tania and his friends to follow the citizens. then citizens directly pursue Tania and his friends. Tania and his friends ran and trying to fight the citizens. they finally managed to defeat residents and after that they are trying to save tyas but, but they are too late. they are all weep for the departure of their friends and regret it has been made tyas murder victim last.

Among the three of them twelve which together go to explore the Forest, only eight only surviving the Tania, Zahra, Rudi, Lily, andri, Mita, Robby and Nico still fear and become a book. after the state of safe suddenly Nico changed again be a human. see Nico turned into a human, Tania directly ran over Nico and laangsung hugged him. Nico sudden embraced by Tania be surprised and confused. then they immediately return to their homes and immediately reported to the police about the event that they know.

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Great story. I like this one, thanks buddy!

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Nice story buddy, I like your story. Thanks!

thanks..

Thanks for sharing nice story, steem on!

thansl for all..

I like your story, thanks for sharing buddy!

u are welco

amazing story

Thanks for sharing a good story!

Thank you for your good dread story @ollya

you are welcome mr @xpilar