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@mvillegas,
I will be having another two part contest in May. This was the first one and it was to write a cliffhanger ending to a short story in part one and then resolve the cliffhanger in part two of the contest, which is this one. It will not be possible for you to enter this part of the two part contest, so, please look for the next one in May. Thanks for your interest.
@Lymmerik
Much appreciated