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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #3: 199 Words-10SBD prize pool!

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Haunted with the Past

Trisha and Fretzie are childhood best friends but Fretzie’s parents never wanted her to be friend with Trisha because his father is an ex-convict with criminal crimes.

One Tuesday afternoon, while they were hanging out, a suspicious man was following them. Because they were scared, they ran immediately but the man followed them and had them caught in the end. When they got caught, the man asked them who's Trisha and because Trisha sensed that the man may be in conflict with his father, she immediately pointed out Fretzie, who in full schock, didn’t speak a word. The man immediately released Trisha and had Fretzie molested and killed. Trisha saw what the man did and so immediately she ran towards home and told his father what happened and right away they went to a place far from their home.

Thirteen years had passed, Trisha already got married and has a daughter named Haley. Haley is very timid and doesn’t love to hang out but on the exact 13th death anniversary of Fretzie, Trisha got a message from Haley saying she’ll hangout with her new friend. When Trisha asked Haley who her friend is, Haley sent Fretzie’s photo, smirking.

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Great horror story! Not the usual plot of a horror story. Nice. Nice. :)

Awee :D Thank you! ^_^ Haha :D

You're welcome dear! :* Keep it up!

I will. ^_^ Thanks again. :)