It surprised me in the direction it took, but not so much in an original way. Honestly it seemed a bit forced, but I suppose that can happen when you're under a deadline...it's certainly happened to me. I'm still looking forward to the next stories though.
I didn't mean to hurt your feelings. Maybe it's just my reading of the piece. I certainly couldn't do what you're doing in writing a story every day. It's kinda like Harlan Ellison isn't it?
Well that's good. It was the "wow" at the beginning of the statement. 30 minutes for that? I have to say "Wow". Looking forward to the next installment in this series.
Been there, read that :)
Cool? what did you think?
It surprised me in the direction it took, but not so much in an original way. Honestly it seemed a bit forced, but I suppose that can happen when you're under a deadline...it's certainly happened to me. I'm still looking forward to the next stories though.
Wow, okay, well thanks for the honest feedback.
I didn't mean to hurt your feelings. Maybe it's just my reading of the piece. I certainly couldn't do what you're doing in writing a story every day. It's kinda like Harlan Ellison isn't it?
LOL no i was serious you gave honest feedback. No hurt feelings i wrote that piece in thirty minutes. I think expanded it wouldn't feel so rushed
Well that's good. It was the "wow" at the beginning of the statement. 30 minutes for that? I have to say "Wow". Looking forward to the next installment in this series.
Just read the story too...., and i really loved the way it went...,
I guess we all just have what we look forward to in a piece...,
Nonetheless @markrmorrisjr We are looking forward to more stories from you