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RE: Finish the Story Challenge!

in #contest7 years ago


She forgot the reason she was in the room as shivers ran down her spine, driving it from her every vein and causing her thinking to go hay-wire. She managed to get herself into the lift, but was still pondering.
"Should i have shouted, should i have given a signal, have i done the right thing?"https://steemit.com/sex/@marik/finish-the-story-challenge

The thought that kept coming each time she managed to get herself was where she was going from here; was she going to walk like she never saw what Donald had done. The battle was not an easy one to fight.

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Your first really grabbed me. Such a nice twist