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RE: STEEMIT HAIKU CONTEST # WEEK 14: (Original Contest)

in #contest • 7 years ago (edited)

Here's my first entry😊

The driftwood
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I am lost like driftwood
Along sea shores how i will be
Need you to find me

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Welcome, @maane
This is a very good first try, we enjoyed it... but
Unfortunately it’s has to many syllables.
Please check...

5-7-5 just edited @moonleesteem thank you for informing

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