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Sorry, but your entry is still three sentences.

  1. A lady asked for a lift on his bike.

  2. He denied.

  3. He felt the weight on backseat.

A valid entry must only be two sentences.

Is it fine now? This must have ruined the experience.

Yes it is perfectly fine now, it didn't ruin the experience but now you have a valid entry and you know now for next contest next week as well.