MY ENTRY TO WRITING CONTEST
TWO ECONOMICALLY DIVERGENT
YOUTH SHOWCASE THEIR WORTH ON A PHOTOSHOOT
It was not until this morning, having examined the picture above, that I got to know that class consciousness thrives healthily in some nativities andl climes.
The picture above is clear pointer to this fact. As you can see from the above that the two young men therein are proud men who believe that class differences means nothing to them. They are friends who belong to two economically different classes but see the need to continue their friendship. Each of them is standing in front of his possession with pomp.
In other climes such as where I come from, a youth will never stay in front of a bicycle and take a picture. They will prefer to take pictures using extravagant possessions even if it means borrowing it.
Another story the picture tells is the serene cum healthy environment that they live in. There are no dirty things around them.
Cultural interplay vis-a-vis the architectural setting is depicted. It shows their unique housing style.
I am impressed. Happiness, health, lack envy and good home is what defines man's prosperity. My perspective is in the strong affirmative. These guys have got all.
Looks good, and reads well, but this is over 300 words. Please revise and shorten it to around 200. Thanks.
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