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RE: New Contest from @Xpilar 12/11-2017 "get free upvote"

in #contest7 years ago (edited)

Brown Character.

Once upon a time there were two big mountains together in the middle of the ocean. Those two mountains were slightly more similar on their appearance. But there were many dissimilarities between them in deep. One mountain was called “Good Mountain”-and another was known as “Bad Mountain”.


People who were living at these mountains were also different and unique than the other people from outside world.
People used to get a unique round scars on their forehead from their birth. Some had white scars and some had black scars.
People with white scars were considered as good people and they lived on “good mountain” white people with black scars were considered as bad people and lived on “bad-mountain”.


This way Mother Nature herself used to decide who were good and who were bad from their birth time by giving them a birth-scar on their forehead. And they were living happily on their respective mountains.
One day suddenly a different type of people appeared on both mountains. They actually had brown scars on their forehead.
They used to went to good mountain during day time and stayed their telling people they are also like the other good people because they also had white scars on their forehead (not actually white though). And they used to go and stay on “bad-mountain” telling people they are also bad because they had black scars.


Like this gradually it was being difficult to differentiate between the good and bad people on those mountains.
Slowly, the population of brown-scared people increased more on numbers. They made people believe that actually people with white-scars were bad people.


Slowly and slowly by time, the good people from the good mountain started disappearing.
Nowadays there are only bad peoples with back and brown scars on those mountains and over the world.

So nowadays we can't find good people in our world.

thank you for your time.

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very good

Thanks for share.

thanks :)

Welcm man.. and nice work.

nice storry

amazing

nice storry

Good job

Thank you for your very good story and words that make sense @katteasis