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     6 years ago  

    middle line is too long!

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       6 years ago (edited) 

      Ok a A slight variation


      Like fish in water ..
      traveling through the sweet pages
      and I see your face!

      https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@felixgarciap/your-face-a-haiku-poem-bd85020e1dcaeest

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         6 years ago  

        I'll count traveling as two syllables, which it is in some parts of the US. How about that!

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