A KISS
Gentle, sweet at first
desire awakens, wanting
bliss, a Hershey's kiss!
https://steemit.com/poetry/@emergehealthier/haiku--a-kiss-qvlhgnfj
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A KISS
Gentle, sweet at first
desire awakens, wanting
bliss, a Hershey's kiss!
https://steemit.com/poetry/@emergehealthier/haiku--a-kiss-qvlhgnfj
Nice but not 5-7-5 syllables! Try again? I'm a stickler b/c I want all to have same rules.
I understand the need for the same rules. I'm wondering what method you use to count the syllables? I ask because I did the chin drop on my hand, which would account for a pronunciation difference (I have a Boston accent.) I also ran it line by line through https://syllablecounter.net/count, and got a 5,7, 5 count. Should I use the dictionary breakdown of syllables? Knowing how you count the syllables will help me correct the haiku.
I got 5-8-4 even with Boston accent...
Thanks, I guess I won't use the syllable counter I was using to check my syllables again. I will try to fix it. I appreciate your feedback.
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I fixed it. Thanks for your help.
Hooray!