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RE: Beta reading contest Ragnarok Conspiracy : Part four 28.000 STEEM in prize money

in #contest7 years ago

As far as favorites and least favorite chapters go, I liked chapter 5 the most as that was the "action chapter"; as I was reading it I could picture the scene playing out in my mind as if it was from a sci-fi/action movie. Chapter 7 was my least favorite because the cliffhanger at the end of the chapter felt like the equivalent of watching an entertaining show or movie on TV, only to abruptly cut to commercial right when the viewer is really anticipating what is going to happen next.