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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #25: 199 words, 5 winners, 15SBD prize pool!

in #contest7 years ago

People say Hell is all fire and smoke. It’s not. It’s the coldest place in the universe, nothing but mountains and tundra and glaciers with cracks that’ll consume you for a thousand years.

I climbed a mountain, running from those flesh eating monsters. A storm shot icicles the size of an arm. I hid in a cave and found I wasn’t alone. We fought, tumbled, bit and tore at one another. The man called me a “cracker ass, raw chicken mother fucker.”

I laughed. The fight stopped. Raw chicken. Only one person in my life called white people that. “Scotty?” I asked. “How the hell are ya?”

“Trey? The fuck...Trey?”

“Yeah.” I told him how I thought I died. “Back of the head. Julie, I think. Same as you, I guess.”

Scotty spat. “You think Julie shot you? She loved you, man. She killed for you. It was Luis, you idiot. He hated you.”

“What?” I waved my hands in the air. “That’s bullshit. Luis was like a father to me.”

“I trusted him, and look what he did to me,” Scotty said. “I saw him, before he did it.”

The cave grew silent. The winds roared outside.