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RE: New Contest from @Xpilar 18/11-2017 "get free upvote"

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My name is Via. This year my family decided to go out of town to vacation. My father searched for a holiday destination and he found a very amazing tourist destination, a small island rarely visited by humans in the Hindia Ocean. All the family members agreed with my dad's choice and three days later we left. After traveling for 2 days we arrived into the island. I was struck by the view of the island. Not too long all member family dicide go to the beach. But I was so lazy to play on the beach I finally decided to take a walk in the surrounding area.
It turns out to walk around the beach is nice also enjoy the cool breeze, birds chirping with cheerful really delicious. Until finally the atmosphere ended when I saw a large door covering a cave. The door was nailed to three logs and the door read, "No entry!" The words made my heart curious until I finally opened the door.
When I came in I found the bones of large animals like dinosaur bones I also found a huge tiger bone with a big fang in my mind I said, "Gosh bone is like a saber tooth bone tiger!" Finally the cave ended with a red button, I curious and finally came out a portal that sucked me in to get in, I scared hysterically and finally I went into the portal while yelling and I fell and fainted.
When I woke up with a sore head! My eyes shaded shadow when I want to see the area around it I fell in a large area, it turns out I see a very large dinosaur, fortunately it dinousauarus herbivore but I think this is a dream. Many times I pinched myself but this is original! I am so amazed to be the first person to see live dinosaurs, while walking the way I find one man but he is different. He was wearing a shirt like a stone-age man I was curious I finally greeted him.
"Hi my name is Via I am 11 years old may I ask?"
The man said. "Hi my name is Lambo I'm 19 years old, what do you want to ask?"
I asked, "where am I now and what date is it now?"
"Oh, you're in Steemland and now in 2500 BC"
"Wow, how amazing I am from 2016 AD."
"Oh you must come from the portal, will you let me go home? Recognizing animals and dinosaurs this year! "
"Of course!"
"Okay" while walking we found a very large paralititan dinosaur drinking water.
"This dinosaur long dinosaur dinosaur is 28 meters and weighs 1 ton more dinosaur is dubbed the long neck because his neck is very long!"
"Wow, that's great."
"Very well let's continue our adventure,"
"Come on."
"Wait!!! Like I heard something "Lambo suddenly stopped me". That's of rugops is running !! Run or we're sacked !!! "we ran out of breath, but the crowd was too crowded so Lambo sank to the thrown into the swift river.
I screaming "Lamboooo." I ran and jumped into the river to save Lambo, luckily I could swim. "Lambo! Lambo are you all right? "
Lambo said, "Yes I'm fine, thanks for saving me."
Next we continue the journey. Until finally we found the cave. Inside the cave there is a red button for me to go home. Lambo said, "It's your way to go home Via .."
"Thank you Lambo has led me to come home and recognize me about dinosaurs and animals, I will always remember you, goodbye Lambo."
Lambo said, "Thanks too I will always remember you. Bye..byee"
The end. Via has coming home to her family and safe. Thank you for reading and thank you to @xpilar for the contest. Bless to all steemian here.

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Thank you @xpilar. It just fairy tale for my daughter😊