You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: STACH Short Story Contest #7: 199 words-10SBD prize pool!

in #contest7 years ago

FOR NO REASON(199WORDS)


"Hurry up", I hollered at Tracy as she ran into my Red Cheverolet, struggling with her gown.

"Let's go", she said with a sigh.

I brought the car to life and sped off with a crowd of confused wedding guests chasing after us.

"We did it!", she cheered excitedly, looking back. We had lost our chasers. I was a good driver.

"I still think this was a bit over the top", I said as I pulled up the vehicle.

" Our love is over the top", she smiled goofily.

"You're one crazy person"

"I'm crazy in love with you however you're just a plain mad man"

"No, I'm mad over you, baby"

She leaned towards me and her lips brushed mine and heat surged through my body as she held my face up. Her hands were soft and her lips softer. Her tongue dived into my mouth an I got so lost in the moment I didn't know when I my eyes closed. She pulled away and smiled at me and I fell from paradise but right there, I knew there was nowhere I'd rather be probably except OUR OWN wedding which we had just eloped from for no reason.

Full story here
https://steemit.com/story/@ajremy/for-no-reading-crazy-love

Sort:  

I hope entries exceeding the 199 rule are penalised because i worked hard to shorten my story

LOL Same here! Good luck, nice entry :)