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RE: New Contest from @Xpilar 4/11-2017 "get free upvote"

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In a city in the United States there is a terror. The mischievous children in the city suddenly disappeared. One of the missing children was Alex. Alex is the leader of the naughty boys in the city. Alex's parents and parents of other lost children do not remember that they had had children. Alex has a sister named Alice.

Alice and her friends in the city realized that Alex and the others had suddenly disappeared. They wonder where the children disappeared. When they are confused they meet an old man. The man told them they could look for children who suddenly disappeared but with consequences their parents would not remember that they ever existed. After they think they agree on the deal. The man reminded that their agreement was in effect starting tomorrow morning. After that they go back to their homes and get ready to find the missing children.

The next day they leave before their parents wake up. They went to gather in an empty house they made basecamp. After they all gather, Alice tells her friends where to go. When finished they go spread to the usual places Alex and his friends usually seen. When Alice and her 3 friends are in search they meet a little girl named Mary. Alice does not know Mary but Mary knows Alice.

Mary says her sister wants to meet Alice. Alice and her friends follow Mary to her house. On the way to Mary's house, Alice wondered who Mary was and what Mary meant was that her sister wanted to see her. Alloys with Alice's question mark and the others reach Mary's house. Mary's sister, Michael was waiting for Mary outside. After that Michael took Alice and her friends into the house and waited in the living room.

Then Michael came into his room and came out carrying a blue box. Then he handed the box to Alice and said that they would need the contents of the box. When Alice wanted to open the box Michael forbade her. Michael says to open the box when they get to where their other friends gather. Alice asks where Michael got the box. Michael did not answer. Mary says that her sister can not tell you where she got the box. After thanking Alice and her friends back to their basecamp.

Once they got to the basecamp they had been waited on by their friends. Alice then opens the box given by Michael. The contents of the box is a map that in some places there are circled and crossed, some photos and a letter. Then Alice noticed the map, it turned out that the places crossed were the children's homes were missing and the place circled were some orphanages outside the city. Some of the photos in the box were pictures of missing children. Alice picks up the letter and the contents of the letter are just words "Everything is arranged". Alice did not understand what the words meant. It was dark so they thought to rest.

At dawn some children are awake and some are finished bathing. One knocked on the door and a boy opened the door and found a basket of food and drinking water. Then he took the basket in and put the basket in the living room where they gathered. After they all had breakfast, Alice looked into the basket and it turned out there were four car keys and there was a small piece of paper that contained "was in the garage". Alice walks out and goes to the place next to the house they live in. When Alice opened the garage door there were four cars.

After all was done they went to the orphanage on the map that yesterday they can. The journey to the orphanage took two hours. After reaching their destination town they spread to several orphanages. After they reached the orphanage they saw that the children they had been looking for were in the orphanage. Then they enter the orphanage to pick up the children they are looking for. After the boys got into the car they drove home the suddenly disappearing child.

Then they drove the children home to their homes. By the time they reached the children's house they were all empty. Suddenly all the tvs in their house were on and there was a guy on the tv saying that those who set them all started from the kids disappearing until they were in the orphanage. The man said there was an address in the mailbox. Then they came out to take the address in the mailbox. The address is not too far from their home. Then they went there on foot.

After they reached the address it was the address of a factory. Then they went in there. There is a very long passageway like no end. After they passed the aisle they found a door. Then they entered the door. Apparently the door was pierced into the street in their home. As they all came out of the door suddenly the door disappeared and they entered their respective homes and their families welcomed them like nothing ever happened.

Since they were tired they went into their respective rooms. As the children disappeared into their room, they found a letter. The contents of the letter are "if you do not want to change we will force you to change". They were suddenly unconscious. And when they realized outside it was morning. They went downstairs and met their parents. Things were back to normal.

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good story

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Great story. I like this one, thanks buddy!

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good story

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Nice story buddy, I like your story. Thanks!

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I like your story, thanks for sharing buddy!

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Thanks for sharing a good story!

Thank you for your horror story @abuteungeut

you are welcome mr @xpilar.. this is because of ur contest.., iam very very like u.. so proud with u...still healthy and always happy.