Constrained Writing Contest #16 + Winners of Constrained Writing Contest #15

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Most writing contests give you a writing prompt or at least a couple of words to work your idea around, which is why I decided to host a slightly different contest.


A constrained writing contest

Instead of being given an idea or a writing prompt, you are allowed to choose the topic completely by yourself. But, varying from week to week, You will face different challenges that limit your writing.

You will be required to omit certain words, use a specific word in every second sentence, use a given sentence unchanged, write a story with a certain amount of words... or a combination of all.


Winners of constrained writing contest #15

This week I myself was the sole judge of the contest and picked the winners at my own discretion.

This week we had 17 writers join us by submitting their entries, the most participants by a long shot! Previous record was 9 participants. I am very happy to see the contest grow in size and reputation, and to be able to read all the stories you've come up with! This week was especially different and fun!
I'd even go so far as to say it was an emotional rollercoaster with all the sentimental stories I've read, all written by you. Some of them were real emotional/existential crysis triggers... and what's not to love about a story that really makes you think?
As much as I liked each and every story you had written, the contest rules only allow for 3 winners, and what a hell it was to pick those 3 winners. But, what had to be done, had to be done.
And so here they are, the winners of this week’s Constrained Writing Contest:

Judge’s note: The first part of the story is all about the pencil feeling like a god. It creates anew on a clean slate. Then when the story goes on, however, the more the pencil realizes it is nothing but a vessel. No one will ever put it on a pedestal, only its work, and not even that work is made entirely thanks to it. In the hands of a good master it will do good, while in the hands of a peasant it will do poorly. It is but a tool toward perfection.
Your piece sent me down an emotional rollercoaster filled with existential crysis.

Judge’s note: Much like @zen-art's story, yours also made me think. You chose an object which by itself holds a very powerful message. You told us how some people appreciate it and what it stands for, while others don't even look at it. Much of your story implies to just about every situation, regardless of the choice of the inanimate object. Although I must say, it was very fitting.

The flowers they bring and the small lights that flicker in the nights too.

I am glad to hear this made the statue happy.

Judge’s note: I thoroughly enjoyed the challenge you made us face when we had to guess this one. And also, much like with the prior two stories, your story also made me think. What if we're also stuck somewhere, and need just a little nudge in the right direction to feel free, even if we broke in the process. Should we stay inside our own comfort zone for the price of freedom?
I would very much like to thank you for writing two additional entries for which you are also rewarding SBD to the people who figure out what the inanimate object was.
Make sure to check out her blog! ;)

Congratulations to the winners!

Honorable mentions in alphabetical order:

I would like to point out that the above entries were absolutely amazing!
@improv's, @simgirl's, earthangel's, @foragingquietude's, @metzli's, @hendeca8, @iikanji's and @somebuttstuff's especially stayed with me. But I had to make the choices and pick the winners, however hard these choices were.
Please check out all the entries, they're all well worth your time! :D

Proof of payment:



With that out of the way, onto constrained writing contest #16!


Rules:

This week it’s all me, again.
I very much enjoyed the sentimental value of the previous week's stories, which is why I wish to continue down that road.
This week I want you to play with the reader's mind and emotions.
Here are the rules I’ve come up with for this week;

  • Write a story that either starts happy and ends sad, or starts sad and ends happy.
  • Raise at least 1 existential question in your story. You can have your characters straight out ask it, or you can be more profound and conceal it within your story.
  • The story must be at least 250 words long and in English.
  • Upvote this post.
  • Post a link to your entry in the comments below.
  • Include tag #constrainedwriting among your other tags.
  • Should you wish to help raise awareness of the contest, please consider resteeming this post (it is by no means compulsory).

Prizes

I will pay out this post's payout in full, both SBD and STEEM!


  • 1st place: 45% of post's payout
  • 2nd place: 27% of post's payout
  • 3rd place 18 % of post's payout
  • Judge takes 5 % for his/her efforts
  • I will take 5 % for hosting, writing and editing the contest

*Note: In case I receive any donations for the contest, the payout percentages apply to the donation itself as well.


Judges

This week I am the judge of the Constrained Writing Contest and will be picking the winners based on my own preference, but try and be as objective as possible.

I will begin reading all entries just prior to this post's payout and hopefully finish right when this post pays out, or slightly after and announce winners.

What's that I hear? You wish to be a judge too? Well look no further!
To apply for a judge and make up your own rules, simply send @svashta a hearty hello on steemit.chat.

*Disclaimer: I will only allow fellow writers as judges to keep the competition high quality.


Deadline

  • Entries are accepted until this post's payout
  • Your entry post must be newer than this post

Good luck!


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Not much of a writer my self , All though I like to read them so I am in on the up vote.

Thanks for the support! :D

Let's see how will my idea for an entry here develops. Seems like the rules contain all the spicy ingredients that many of us enjoy including when writing! Cheers man! : )

You're free to use a little more chilli should you see it fit ;) You know, to spicy it up some extra ;D

Looking forward to what you come up with :D

Expect my soup later this week :D

Mmmmm. Soup :3
Now I crave soup.
Thanks -.-

Thank you for the reward :) This week sounds interesting too, my fingers are itching to write already.

You earned it ^.^

Participating again? :D Can't wait to read what your itchy fingers produce ^^

Very probable, I do have something half cooked, just needs a bit tweaking

And an entire week left to tweak it to perfection! :D
I believe in you :D

Aw shucks man, that's sweet :)

I like the idea for the next contest since existential questions are the best philosophical questions to be had, therefore I will enter it! Good luck everyone! Resteemed and I hope many people will 😀

Here's my entry for this contest; https://steemit.com/writing/@hrovat66/a-life-worth-living good luck everyone!

Thank you very much for your entry.
I will read all entries on Sunday just prior to contest end to be as fair as possible.

They are indeed!
And a good story can really leave you feeling... questioned... Let's leave it at that.

Happy to hear you're participating! :D Can't wait to see your entry :D
And thank you very much for the resteem!

Definitely joining this contest. Thanks for the mention @svashta

Awesome! :D Happy to know you're joining again! :D

Your challenge was added to Steemit Contest Compilation (29.01-04.02): Win free SBD and STEEM for current week.

Thank you @svashta for giving Steemians (especially minnows) a chance to get free SBD and STEEM.

Thanks! :D

What a great idea! I was all into existentialism back in grad school, so I'll give this contest a shot. Sounds fun!

I enjoyed the last contest thoroughly, I look forward to the new one. I love this literary committee we're gradually becoming

Yeap! We are growing in number indeed :D
Looking forward to your entry ^^

Thank you very much for your entry, will check it out now :D

Thank you for the mention. Excited to do the next one!

I bet it's going to be good! ;D

Thank you! I am so honored to be the winner. Looking forward to writing something for this weeks contest! :)

You very much deserved it! :D It was a fantastic read and I cannot wait to see what you bring us this week. :D

Life and Death:

Death was an omen I had not foreseen for a child who just came out of his mother’s womb. Death of aging grandparents was expected as they had lived for many years. Death of parents fighting a terminal disease was of no surprise. However, death of a two-month-old newborn was the least anticipated and had shocked his parents to the core. This was a story of Mel's sad past.

Five Years Ago:

My friend, Mel, had just experienced childbirth and being a mother for the first time in her life to a lovely baby boy, Justin. He was born healthy, and mother and baby went home celebrating a new addition to the family. The parents, Mel and her husband, David, had been ecstatic about the pregnancy and had the nursery room painted blue and ready for this new arrival. Baby Justin was the love of his parents and grandparents. He was been eating and sleeping well.

On one terrible, stormy night when Mel went to nurse him, she found that baby Justin was no longer breathing. This tragic discovery crippled her thoughts and immobilized her for minutes until at last, reality kicked in and she screamed for her life. In this case, it was the life of her first and only child.

They drove to the hospital in rage and disbelief. Luckily, they did not caused an accident in a road rage. The doctor proclaimed Justin dead as soon as the baby arrived. He had died from a congenital heart disease.

It was an incredible finding to Mel and David because neither of them had a family history of heart disease. Moreover, neither Mel’s parents nor David’s parents had a history of heart disease. The results had them all baffled, until Mel, in grief and shame, shouted out that David was not the father of baby Justin.

“Who’s the father of my son?” David asked in anger and pain.

Their story had a sad ending as Mel and David's marriage did not last past the year in which baby Justin had died, and the parents had never met again.

https://steemit.com/constrainedwriting/@magicmage/life-and-death

Thank you very much for your entry.
I will read all entries on Sunday just prior to contest end to be as fair as possible.

@OriginalWorks (to reward the post and help me find it when I finish my entry)

Thank you very much and I'm looking forward to your entry! :D

Welp, this is my new hobby now. Thanks for that!

Hahhaa :D Very happy to hear that! :D
Looking forward to your entry ^^

Hi! I decided to join at the last moment. So here's my story, hope you like it :) https://steemit.com/writing/@wordsalmighty/my-little-bluebelle

Thank you very much for your entry, I'll read and comment on it tomorrow! :D
I want to read through all the entries "at once" because I want to be as objective as possible :p

Thank you very much for your entry! :D
I will read it and comment on it tomorrow :D

This is my Entry

Thank you very much for your entry.
I will read all entries on Sunday just prior to contest end to be as fair as possible.

I’m not in steemit.chat only discord but would LOVE to help you Judge one of these weeks.

Thanks for the mentions. I visited lots of the stories and enjoyed them as well :)

Svashta#5217

Add me on discord then ;)

Thank you very much for your entry.
I will read all entries on Sunday just prior to contest end to be as fair as possible.

I have never entered this competition before but came across it on the freewrite page. It is very tricky with all the rules but I thought that i would like to give it a shot.

https://steemit.com/constrainedwriting/@niallon11/battle-of-the-bands-constrained-writing

Thank you very much for your entry.
Glad you decided to give it a shot, and super happy to learn you heard for it through the freewrites! :D
I will read all entries on Sunday just prior to contest end to be as fair as possible.

There. I'm done. This took some effort but it was worth it. Since I was the last weeks winner, I had some pressure on me to do a solid job and not to disappoint @svashta. Hope I won't :)
https://steemit.com/constrainedwriting/@zen-art/a-deep-breath-of-silence-constrained-writing

Thank you very much for your entry.
I will read all entries on Sunday just prior to contest end to be as fair as possible.

I'm done with my draft for episode 16! Submitting in the queue right now! : )

I wanted to read the draft, but the queue won't let me :<
I have insufficient permissions :(
You got me interested now though :D

Very happy to hear you enjoyed writing it :D

Thank you very much for your entry.
I will read all entries on Sunday just prior to contest end to be as fair as possible.

Did you see my entry

Saw you post it here, yes... But will read it (like all other entries) on Sunday...
It's hard to keep them all in mind throughout the week, so I'll read them all one by one on Sunday and try and be objective as possible.

Write a story that either starts happy and ends sad, or starts sad and ends happy.

That's what I usually do when I write! The first one! : )
A good place to start participating in this series of contests!

Raise at least 1 existential question in your story. You can have your characters straight out ask it, or you can be more profound and conceal it within your story.

. . . This, too, is something I normally try to do in all my longer stories! (I just need to avoid procrastinating.)

I just need to avoid procrastinating.

Sounds exactly like what I would say ... did we just become best friends? :D

Could be :)

My entry: Pivotal.

It'll be finished later today, 15000 words expected. I'll be updating that post. Expect a shocker ending. Freewriting.

updating that post. Expect a shocker

:D

A producer asked Puccini, if the opera was going to be cut in length, can they also cut out Tosca jumping to her death?

Puccini replied: ``No, no, absolutely not, she definitely has to jump off.''

``What if Cavaradossi doesn't die in our version?''

``Even then.'' (Her cat died?)

Thank you very much for your entry @foragingquietude! :D
Will check it out on Sunday ^^

I wanted to read through all the entries when submitted but at some point just gave up... and will read them all prior to contest end ^^

No worries! You have been a popular host recently! I'm so happy to see it taking off.

Same here! It's a delight to see so many people participate! :D
But also sad at the same time, knowing there's rewards only for the top 3 :|

Congrats to the winners!

My entry: Pivotal.

It'll be finished by the end of the day, 15000 words expected. I'll be updating that post.

Here's my submission for this round:

Johny's Way

@steemfluencer I just noticed the link below the pic. I thought you were just sharing the photo to make us laugh. 😅

If I had my way, ill let you win for making me laugh out loud! Hahahahahaha