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RE: Lost key/ Schlüssel verloren

in #comedy7 years ago

Here i am going to try improve your story... xD

To Start my Blog with fun i Tell you a Story which nearly got me some trouble.

To start my blog funny i would like to tell you a story which nearly got me into trouble.

I sometimes think About everything But Not the important things so i forgot to take my keys with me and closed the door.

Sometimes I am thinking about everything possible but this time I forgot to take my keys and closed the door.

Right After i closed the door i remember that i forgot my keys i thought what schould i do because i also forgot my phone so i Cant call anyone for help.

After I closed the door I realized that I forgot my key and my phone too.
I did not know what to do ;$

After I was in I've seen a neighbor taking her phone to take a call i ran out of the house and sayed "Hi nice to meat you" so she don't call the police

Just after I got into the basement I saw a neighbor taking her phone to make a call. Instantly I ran outside and greeted her "Hi nice to meet you" so she did not call the police.

I hope that helps.

There can be mistakes in spelling and grammar.

I have noticed that you write most of the words with the first letter capital. Please do not do that! Only names, countries, languages have a capital letter as the first one.

Meat is a product from animals. The word you was looking for is meet^^.
And sometimes you have used the wrong tense.

Have a nice day!
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Thank you for spending some time with my text. there is much more than i thought it would be. I need some time to work on it.

no problem. Always here to help^^