Is this about the asthma attack you mentioned in your other post? Who is Ade?
This definitely feels like a spoken word piece. The rhythms flow from line to line and the irregular rhyming lends itself perfectly to that style.
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Yes,lived with it since I was two, almost 30 now. Yeah it came out with a spoken word feel but I wasn't exactly trying to go for that. Think it came out well enough as your kind words suggest so. Thank you for reading. Cheers 🍷