You have a gifted talented mind to create a story. I read through all of it and thinking it was non-fiction story. You totally immerse your readers because of the words you use out here and for that I salute you. I will not be suprise if someday I saw your book in a national book store. Great mind @chronocrypto
Thank you, I am creative with Dystopian, Cyberpunk Stories and can easily weave them into a coherent plot. My writing style is concise but still gets across what is necessary. Which is what I like to show in every story I write.
" I will not be suprise if someday I saw your book in a national book store." Funny that you mentioned this, I am currently working on a book I might post the chapters here... Might be something worth doing.
I am glad you enjoyed it. If you haven't already I would suggest you read or even listen to the past stories.
This was the first story of yours I've ever seen.
Looking forward to checking out the others.
Btw...don't hate the bots...without them it's a good chance I wouldn't have found you...and it got you a new follower too.
This is the type of content worth marketing.
Great words thank you
God will not injustice anyone .. Life is fair and everyone has a chance
One has to have the will to succeed whatever the circumstances..
Okay so I read your whole post. And was amazed. I thought this was non-fiction lol. I thought Dr. Crono was someone like Nikola Tesla or Einstein. I feel very fooled and silly right now! Nevertheless, this is really interesting the aspect of anti-aging. This character would describe how the actual person who possibly would develop this cure would be, as you said developing it for the good of people and not for fame and fortune. The audiobook for some reason will not load on my phone, but I'm amazed at the amount of effort you put into this. People who sacrifice their time and effort for noble pursuits will always be happier and successful in the long run.
I thought it was for real initially. I am a fool. I read till the end though. I can't write like that.. I admire those who could, like yourself.. Well done
You are not a fool, I tend to be creative with Dystopian, Cyberpunk Stories and can easily weave them into a coherent plot. I am glad you thought it was non-fiction.
This is really nice. I don't know how to tell stories, but I always appreciate those who are very good in writing. For once, I thought it was a real story. I salute your creativity
This is great. If aging could be properly delayed At last, the achievement would be enormeous, since at current pace time is passing by so fast that is hard to actualy enjoy it, it would be great if we could extend our life just a little bit more.
I adore your thought and the story u composed previously. I am a maker and producer myself. I been attempting to make sense of how this stage can help movie producers and your post gave me a few thoughts. In any case .. I will endeavor to partake in your challenge. I have additionally educated a portion of my companions on steemit who composes story....I am eager to perceive how for reasons unknown turns out . I have my own particular creation house n all ..so on the off chance that you require any assistance let me know.
Thank you:-)
i love your idea and the story u wrote above. I am a producer and film maker myself. I been trying to figure out how this platform can help film makers and your post gave me some ideas. Anyway .. I will try to participate in your contest. I have also informed some of my friends on steemit who writes story....I am excited to see how it turns out . I have my own production house n all ..so if you need any help let me know.. :) ... all the best !!!
Okay, I would have a 55 plus rep but I hopped from profile @orbitdrop@vandalizmrecordz to my new one because I had to get away from an old business partner. I do however want to do your voice reading and think I am a good fit for it. If you would like to see if you agree my music is on my profile.
I have a descent voice. People always try to get me to sing. I have been told everything from Johny Cash to Mogan Freemon. Not into the singing thing though.
Dr. Chrono must have thought about the implications of his findings for weeks on end. I wasn't going to let what I found sit in a lab, locked up forever. However, could you really release him into the world and let the consequences come as they may? That's how the versions of the technology appeared, apparently. Most people pretended not to have anticipated the consequences of a given breakthrough when they launched it and only took advantage of the financial gains and fame.
Scientists are people so intelligent and with so many ideas that maybe the real world can overwhelm them, how many formulas will remain secret in the laboratories? maybe fear, conflict of interest and who knows what else might influence the decisions to keep some fantastic discoveries under lock and key, this reading blew my mind! Thank you very much. Happy night.
LOL a bit? - He could of at least commented on the post first and then asked politely - even then a single link would be pushing it. Screw this guy. What a cock.
Great Article.. But what I am thinking, there is no way to regain your age back. Everything has a time limit and it will work till it's time. I heard about the famous dancer Michael Jackson, who kept alternative for all his organs by keeping donors and was following a list of doctors advises in order to live for 150years but even after that he didn't servive..
Al leer la historia del Dr. Chrono me sentí atrapada por la historia, es increíble las emociones que ocasionan un buen relato en un lector, quisiera tener la pericia para escribir un texto con esos elementos tan codiciados por los amantes de este genero de la narración.
Thank you for sharing, I like your writing style. Your short story dilemma is very interesting and makes me think of a novel I read not long time ago: The Immortalsfrom Barjavel.
A scientist discovers a virus which makes humans immortal. Is it for the greater good or a big threat for humanity... I let you read the book @chronocrypto ;)
trust in humanity? it's a very delicate question to analyze
Trust in humanity is not the future, it is in the present that is responsible for demonstrating that what human beings are capable of doing with a discovery like this.
In our life there are clear examples of how it is that what humanity can do in situations like this. When we have entrusted a secret to a family member and then that person to bother ends up telling everything.
For my part, I put my grain of sand, I act with a law "Do not do to others what I do not like to be done". Great Job with this distopian fiction and sorry for any mistake (my natal languages is spanish)
You have a gifted talented mind to create a story. I read through all of it and thinking it was non-fiction story. You totally immerse your readers because of the words you use out here and for that I salute you. I will not be suprise if someday I saw your book in a national book store. Great mind @chronocrypto
Thank you, I am creative with Dystopian, Cyberpunk Stories and can easily weave them into a coherent plot. My writing style is concise but still gets across what is necessary. Which is what I like to show in every story I write.
" I will not be suprise if someday I saw your book in a national book store." Funny that you mentioned this, I am currently working on a book I might post the chapters here... Might be something worth doing.
I am glad you enjoyed it. If you haven't already I would suggest you read or even listen to the past stories.
I will do. What a coincidence that you are writing a book to publish now. Can't wait to see you succeed my friend.
This was fantastic.
Deserves more organic votes.
(btw...i rarely ever comment, so for real...great job)
Coming from you, means a lot especially since you rarely comment.
I am glad you enjoyed it, I hope you had a chance to read or even listen to the past stories.
I hate using bots to get my stories views, but yet here we are.
This was the first story of yours I've ever seen.
Looking forward to checking out the others.
Btw...don't hate the bots...without them it's a good chance I wouldn't have found you...and it got you a new follower too.
This is the type of content worth marketing.
Great words thank you
God will not injustice anyone .. Life is fair and everyone has a chance
One has to have the will to succeed whatever the circumstances..
Nice post
Thank you.
Okay so I read your whole post. And was amazed. I thought this was non-fiction lol. I thought Dr. Crono was someone like Nikola Tesla or Einstein. I feel very fooled and silly right now! Nevertheless, this is really interesting the aspect of anti-aging. This character would describe how the actual person who possibly would develop this cure would be, as you said developing it for the good of people and not for fame and fortune. The audiobook for some reason will not load on my phone, but I'm amazed at the amount of effort you put into this. People who sacrifice their time and effort for noble pursuits will always be happier and successful in the long run.
Damn, good point
That is false....I sacrifice my time and effort for the noble pursuit of watching porn and I am not becoming happier of successful
Reading indulges the mind
Yeah, it awakens the magical feeling of sleep.
Nice post!
Good article, respect
cool
Very cool. On a serious note we should really figure out a way to stop aging.
I thought it was for real initially. I am a fool. I read till the end though. I can't write like that.. I admire those who could, like yourself.. Well done
You are not a fool, I tend to be creative with Dystopian, Cyberpunk Stories and can easily weave them into a coherent plot. I am glad you thought it was non-fiction.
This is really nice. I don't know how to tell stories, but I always appreciate those who are very good in writing. For once, I thought it was a real story. I salute your creativity
The title def caught my eye, good work
I am guessing you are going to enter than?
This is great. If aging could be properly delayed At last, the achievement would be enormeous, since at current pace time is passing by so fast that is hard to actualy enjoy it, it would be great if we could extend our life just a little bit more.
Thanks for sharing a great post.
I like it
I liked it
Better to donate people than upvoting bots. Bravo!
I guess.
Hy all I just started to giveaway SBD on MY BLOG Check to participate
Nice post!
I adore your thought and the story u composed previously. I am a maker and producer myself. I been attempting to make sense of how this stage can help movie producers and your post gave me a few thoughts. In any case .. I will endeavor to partake in your challenge. I have additionally educated a portion of my companions on steemit who composes story....I am eager to perceive how for reasons unknown turns out . I have my own particular creation house n all ..so on the off chance that you require any assistance let me know.
Thank you:-)
Awessome storyline..... I especially love the idea behind this; it's a thumbs up from me
Why thank you very much, I am glad you enjoyed it.
Did you get a chance to listen to the audiobooks?
Can the story be longer/shorter than 500 words, or must it be exactly that? If longer/shorter is allowed, how much longer/shorter can it be?
👍🏻
i love your idea and the story u wrote above. I am a producer and film maker myself. I been trying to figure out how this platform can help film makers and your post gave me some ideas. Anyway .. I will try to participate in your contest. I have also informed some of my friends on steemit who writes story....I am excited to see how it turns out . I have my own production house n all ..so if you need any help let me know.. :) ... all the best !!!
was I the only one who felt this was some real discovery only to discover differently.. nice one there
Cool competition
Chic article. I learned a lot of interesting and cognitive. I'm screwed up with you, I'll be glad to reciprocal subscription))
Well glad you got screwed up my me, I guess.
Okay, I would have a 55 plus rep but I hopped from profile @orbitdrop @vandalizmrecordz to my new one because I had to get away from an old business partner. I do however want to do your voice reading and think I am a good fit for it. If you would like to see if you agree my music is on my profile.
Good Information @chronocrypto
thee story of doctor chrono, was awesome! I love short stories like thaat...
You have amazing abilities, have rare rhetoric that many people have. So the story that is made really bewitched the reader. @chronocrypto
Nice job
Hey @, great post! GOOD
I enjoy your content Keep up the good work! It's always nice to see nice content on Steemit! :)
Hey @, great post! GOOD
I enjoy your content Keep up the good work! It's always nice to see nice content on Steemit! :)
I have a descent voice. People always try to get me to sing. I have been told everything from Johny Cash to Mogan Freemon. Not into the singing thing though.
Nice nice :D
That is great to hear, what about the completed audiobooks what did you think of them?
This is nice idea! :)
It sure is!
Scientists are people so intelligent and with so many ideas that maybe the real world can overwhelm them, how many formulas will remain secret in the laboratories? maybe fear, conflict of interest and who knows what else might influence the decisions to keep some fantastic discoveries under lock and key, this reading blew my mind! Thank you very much. Happy night.
I am extremely glad you enjoyed this short story have you had a chance to read the past stories?
I think I read some last week or maybe the week before, time goes by so fast that I lose the notion, thanks for sharing.
evaluate my work and vote please help me a lot.
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A bit rude.
LOL a bit? - He could of at least commented on the post first and then asked politely - even then a single link would be pushing it. Screw this guy. What a cock.
Human being is unstoppable.. Can't wait to see how this amazing idea changes life in the future.. tks #chronocrypto for ur findings
Great Article.. But what I am thinking, there is no way to regain your age back. Everything has a time limit and it will work till it's time. I heard about the famous dancer Michael Jackson, who kept alternative for all his organs by keeping donors and was following a list of doctors advises in order to live for 150years but even after that he didn't servive..
This is a Dystopian Short Story, not meant to be taken seriously.
What is Dystopian?
Al leer la historia del Dr. Chrono me sentí atrapada por la historia, es increíble las emociones que ocasionan un buen relato en un lector, quisiera tener la pericia para escribir un texto con esos elementos tan codiciados por los amantes de este genero de la narración.
Sorry don't understand.
I hope you liked it though.
I like the post .you are working very hard. And you are share good information. Thanks for shearing.
Yes very much good information, only that it was a story.
Fictional
Thank you for sharing, I like your writing style. Your short story dilemma is very interesting and makes me think of a novel I read not long time ago: The Immortals from Barjavel.
A scientist discovers a virus which makes humans immortal. Is it for the greater good or a big threat for humanity... I let you read the book @chronocrypto ;)
That sounds like a splened book, I must read it than.
Thank you for the kind words.
Have you had a chance to read my past stories, or listened to the audiobook version of them? They came out really great.
Not yet, I'm very new on steemit. I will check for sure, especially the audiobook.
This is very interesting, considering the fact that I don't want to get old. Can't wait for this great discovery to start affecting life.
.. This is a fictional story.
I definitely want to try out for doing voicework for your audio stories!
Sure, did you get a chance to listen to the completed audibooks to see if its a right fit?
did you find your vocal sir??
Well guessing by the question, you didn't get to listen to the completed ones.
very steady, a very good post, incredible fellow steemania
i like
trust in humanity? it's a very delicate question to analyze
Trust in humanity is not the future, it is in the present that is responsible for demonstrating that what human beings are capable of doing with a discovery like this.
In our life there are clear examples of how it is that what humanity can do in situations like this. When we have entrusted a secret to a family member and then that person to bother ends up telling everything.
For my part, I put my grain of sand, I act with a law "Do not do to others what I do not like to be done". Great Job with this distopian fiction and sorry for any mistake (my natal languages is spanish)
For sure I can't over there. Because I never know what it was?