Thanks, @jayna! I found a situation that matches your criteria. But I am not sure that what came out from "under my pen" sort of speak is actually an interesting and a complete story with the theme, the idea, the conflict, a good dynamics, and consistent narrative.
Rather than wasting your time for feedback, I'd rather join the group on Discord. I used to be a member of several Yahoo writing groups. It was a productive time.
So I'd appreciate the link to join your club.
Cheers!