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RE: 50-word Short Story Contest: Winner and New Prompt!

in #challenge6 years ago

Yes, I can totally understand the decision around the kiss. It's such a challenge to decide what to keep and what to let go of in these micro-fiction pieces. The kiss, to me, could be many things. A kiss goodbye. The last vestige of his commitment to her. A consolation prize. I interpreted that it's a sign he really did love her, but his desire to start fresh was greater.

As for what he was running from, it could be anything. My imagination did not go to the extreme that he may have killed someone, but that he was an outlaw of some kind. Bank robber, bandit... wanted for robbing stage coaches. Any of those seem possible!

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Yes. That's what's fun with micro--the author only suggests but the majority of the story is built in the mind of the reader. We really have to learn to trust them.

It's tough, but yes we absolutely do!