A well written post which focuses mainly on a few food items. For the reader to get interested enough to go to a restaurant and succumb to the succulent comments of a writer, more should be presented.
I would like to know the general ambience of the place, the kind of company you find at the neighboring tables, the chefs, the kitchen and the servers. It is difficult to describe food as everyone's nose and taste buds are different. But there re general descriptions that all can relate to . " delectable" to you may not be my delectable. Smokiness of salmon....good description. Would like more description of aroma of food. It should be described as a complex perfume with its accords is described. Texture is important . What feelings it brings forth is essential.
It is a well written short post that does not seem to promote anything except the individual experience. If taken from that view , it was a mouth watering post. Greeeeat work. I enjoyed the post almost as much as you enjoyed the food