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RE: Writing Contest : Thieving Little Scums

This feels emotional, raw, yet also contemplative and observational. I appreciate how you are using the narrative to make the reader aware of the plight of the unseen, and the voices of the unheard.

It's certainly not way, @perennial, but you are shining light on the forgotten; so important.

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thanks for the detailed observation. I try to deliver it the best I can and no better subject than our children that are neglected.