Day 106 Freewrite Prompt: The Smell From Within

yomibolo (44)in #busy • 7 years ago (edited)

My Dearest Mother,

Paisley was beautiful. She looked like an angel. Her skin glowed, her eyes sparkled, her aura was mesmerizing. But when I got to know her, dwell with her, visit her. She was unequivocally something else. The smell from within her soul could be described as iniquitous,evil, detrimental to my being. Her beauty captured me but her soul erased my dignity. At last I'm free from her beauty. At last I rise from the shackles and never have to smell the stench of her soul that was and will always be Paisley's heart.

Your Son,
David

7 years ago in #busy by yomibolo (44)

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docpaoh (41) 7 years ago

Great job! Excellent!

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yomibolo (44) 7 years ago

Thank you!

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zen-art (68) 7 years ago

Very nice and so vivid!

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yomibolo (44) 7 years ago

Thanks for reading!

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mariannewest (74) 7 years ago

Oh wow!! That was compact and said so much!!

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yomibolo (44) 7 years ago

Thanks

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ablaze (74) 7 years ago

So much captured there in 5 minutes @yomibolo Well done, looking forward to reading your next one :)

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yomibolo (44) 7 years ago

Thanks for reading.

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omra-sky (63) 7 years ago

True beauty is, indeed, within. David is a wise young man. Please, allow me to deliver today's prompt:

For the first prompt of the multiple-prompt Weekend Freewrite, click Here!
Or, if you'd prefer to do a single prompt, click Here!

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yomibolo (44) 7 years ago

Thanks I will review it.

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felt.buzz (75) 7 years ago

Nice work! Very powerful images of a stinky soul. :)

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