This is a very good post mechwarrior. I look forward to others. Your use of the word "detrimental" seems out of place. It didn't seem to fit the sentence.
I hope you do more writing.
RR
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This is a very good post mechwarrior. I look forward to others. Your use of the word "detrimental" seems out of place. It didn't seem to fit the sentence.
I hope you do more writing.
RR