hello @osazeemicaiah
I think you have a potential of writing good fictions or non-fiction as the case maybe. I see a creative writer here.
I want you to tap into your potential to write a full blown post. If you can ensure you finish it in one post no matter how long except in cases where it is inevitable.
That said, the suspense is pretty much okay for a short piece.
Cheers
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