This is so cool, your fiction writing is very readable and I wouldn't have guessed English was a second language. And the character design is great, very clean design and she is totally evocative of a swift and silent killer :) Really top notch mate! [oops tried to add some extra love with tipu curate but I see you already got tipu curate'd :joy:]
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Thank you very much for your feedback! I wasn't so sure about posting the story I almost removed it entirely from the post, but I'm glad people find it ok, although not great, I hope it's a good start for me. And thanks for thinking it worth to get curated! ^^