Thanks for your efforts, and I commend you for seeking feedback. Here's my 2 cents..

Firstly, I love the look and feel of everything. Very contemporary. Well done.

THE WORLD'S FASTEST, MOST DECENTRALIZED EXCHANGE
-- Perfect wording IMO.

Bitshares is built using the latest in industry research, now offering a stack of financial services including exchange and banking on a blockchain.
-- I think you should also mention the potential to run ICOs. The prospect of getting involved in ICOs without jumping through ETH hoops could be very enticing to a lot of people, in my opinion.

I don't know enough about the technical aspect of that stuff, but I believe Bitshares can run ICOs and compete with Ethereum, but it's just a matter of raising awareness. Is that the case? If so, surely the "ICO potential" of Bitshares should be hyped as a strong selling point.

Finally, I think you should include something which is sorely lacking in many of these crypto sites - A high quality "team info" section. I know these sections are popular, and they're important, but so many of them feature terrible photos which could do more harm than good.

I think some friendly faces would bring a more trust-worthy and professional impression to the Bitshares brand. Just be sure to pay a photographer for nice shots, and have everyone dressed very well, (no crinkly Tshirts or baseball caps.)

Cheers