First, I appreciate you taking your time to explain to us in English.
I like your attitude because you're trying every day to improve your post and continue to learn.
Even though I love music and I'm not expert on giving feedback on music videos. May be you should look around on Dlive and see what other people are doing and look at their Dlive journey and you'll get some ideas.
thank you friend, I will follow your advice. Is really admirable the way you help others who have less experience in steemit
exactly and it's up to us make the most of the guides we have throughout our lives