I love this! One word of advice- you might check the reading level of your book at rewordify.com and make sure your language is hitting the age group you want it to hit. It looks a little higher level (to me) than most childrens books.
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Thanks for the tip, I will check it when it's finished! :)This is not the final language I'm going to use. I have to shorten the text and make it easier to understand like you' ve said.
I think I wrote so detailed, because I want to improve my english with every post and that everyone here can follow my thoughts :D
I had no idea you were learning English- it's very well written!