I agree with @thedarkhorse there is a maket for the book. I like the first story but I feel like the lady is too clam. I would be much more out of my mind.
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I agree with @thedarkhorse there is a maket for the book. I like the first story but I feel like the lady is too clam. I would be much more out of my mind.
ha ha ha yes perhaps you are right @sumsum.
I did talk with the lady herself and she was not emotional at the time. I suppose she had calmed down. I think this influenced me when I wrote the story. At the same time I do not want the reader to become too sad over the stories either.
I will be putting another one out later today of tomorrow : )
Good to hear your thoughts : )