my comic: Android Blues 102 first look

in #art6 years ago

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Here's the next page in my graphic novel, just finished.

Elvis, who seemed to be her only path to salvation, has just rejected her advances.

Here are a couple steps in the process. The original idea was to have a full page with what I feel is an important story beat, and also a good visual. (I learned this from Herge's Tintin many years ago.)
Since this one had no text, I skipped the layout stage.

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I changed my mind about the pose/angle.

Page103Sketch2.jpg

And here's the final:

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Thanks for watching!

Previous pages:
Here

First page:
Here

Links to some of my other art:
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Good call on the pose revision, it really conveys the emotion better, especially since it has her focusing out of frame and lines up with the direction of the rainfall.

Thank you! :)

I find it amazing how a sketch can come to life like that. Thanks for sharing your process with us. It's been fun following this story

Amazing work! I'll be sure to follow you and your journey.

Amazing drawing... It almost looks like a photo. Wow! 😃

I give it to you 🙌 those drawings are awesome!!! Keep it up!!! 😎👍

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