you should ask for some editing help if you would like to have it @djei.art22 .

I could help you if you would like, and there is a room for it on PAL discord too.

Did you know that?

the work is lovely, but there are a couple of words that we don't really use in English and some places to be improved for flow and meaning.

I mean I loved it, but as you yourself said it could be improved.

anyhow, best wishes.
you can connect with me in the MAP room if you see me in there, or leave me a message.

I am just checking out everyone's profile, everyone who is going into the comp.