Your posts blow me away. The eye for detail, the level of description, the whipped cream analogy (which was spot on)! I've had stories and poems that I've had to scrap before too. It makes me sad to have to do it but sometimes you simply hit a dead end. Wonderful post!
Thanks, Eric. I found the energy I use trying to make something work is better spent going to the trouble of starting over. In the end, it's worth the time.
That's a good point. There are no such things as mistakes, only lessons.