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RE: Spider Coccoon

in #art6 years ago

excellent drawing, very good use of colors and mixtures, but I want to make a small observation, with your permission, the landscape is well defined, but it is cloudy, it lacks body, it lacks contrasts, to define the place and its components, in the drawing you can see that you hardly scare the black, or any other dark tone to highlight the shadows, this makes the drawing lack of naturalness, if you had placed more shadows you would have given more presence, I hope friend, my comment is seen as a opinion to improve, many times our comments are always praise and wonderful, I think we should make comments that help the artist more, to tell him their real opinions of what is really seen, this would make better cartoonists and best friends, best regards, friend I wish many successes.

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I'm definitely taking all the inputs so I can be better :) It is good to hear suggestions. I will try to use more contrast in the future, for sure :)