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RE: AIR-CLINIC WRITING CONTEST : End of the World

in #air-clinic7 years ago

I didn't expect the way the text ended! You brought fun to a rather serious subject - being ill. I think it's really interesting to picture the body parts talking to each other and complaining about the fever, haha. I hope you're feeling better! You should really rest and give some space to your body parts to be in peace :)

I go back to bed and rub some Vick's vaporub on my feet just like mom used to do.

I thought this part was really sweet too. AW! :))

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haha the best stories are one of making it relatable, with some parts thrown in your childhood and some humor lol

I wanted to throw the body parts talking as part of a hallucinating dream.