"Mt. Mayon is an active stratovolcano, the most active volcano in the Philippines, an active volcano that based on his recorded history already claimed thousands of life."
You mean to use "lives" here, as that is the plural form of "life", and it has claimed more than one life. You also want to use "it's", as it is an object, and not a person.
It also sounds a bit awkward because of you repeating "active volcano". How about this? "Mt. Mayon, an active stratovolcano, is the most active volcano in the Philippines. Based on it's recorded history has already claimed thousands of lives."
"With Mayon's ability to destroy lies its ability to naturally create perfect spots for a perfect selfie and a perfect adventure."
I think you meant to say "Along with Mayon's ability to destroy, lies its ability to naturally create perfect spots for a perfect selfie and a perfect adventure."
Perfect also sounds a bit repetitive, but that's up to you.
Your English is pretty impressive for your age. Keep studying and you'll be able to get a really good job with it.
I'm limiting my upvote to 1%, because you spammed in general chat. I normally flag for that, but I was seriously impressed by your English. Getting fans here takes time, and lots of work making personal connections with people, commenting on their posts, and networking.
first please accept my apology for my message in the general channel, it wont happen again.. :-) second i appreciate you for visiting and upvoting my post regardless of the limit you've set. And third a big thanks for your #ConstructiveCriticism thank you for giving input in reconstructing some part of my article, i truly appreciate that as a newbie that's actually what i want "inputs and criticism" along side with some appreciation.. :-) im giving you a big thanks with a big heart. I will make my next posts much better.. :-)