This was good fiction. Although, I noticed that there were punctuations missing. Some grammatical errors too but all in all this was good.
Would love to know what the assassin will do to Dylan when he finds him.
Like the suspense that the unknown caller brings. Who is the caller?
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I wish I know who that caller was and what Dylan would do. Thanks for reading.
lol... you wrote it? Nice work! You better come on and spill your little secrets!