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RE: AdSactly Poetry - "The Freedom with Love"

in #adsactly6 years ago


You reach true love and make long voyage in your life. Separate by ocean and continent make your love growth bigger and bigger. So you fill your life wit your love. I just want to say perfect couple. I don't imagine how big you love each other. Although late, with all my deepest feeling I want to say Happy Birthday. i hope your love planting will shady to cool all. i just make a word. i hope you accept it.Beautiful poetry, @adsactlty. Deepest word from your heart @jeronimorubio.

in your eyes I see a strand of longing
because this longing is also what I always bring
because in this longing there is always good hope
from this good hope, I still survive to the top

all about love makes it better
there are tears and laughter
unite in joy and sorrow
from yesterday, now until tomorrow

with a handful of words I delivered
miss and love tan not whispered
enter my heart so that you know my love appearance
walking down every niche of my soul and conscience



thank you Steemit
Warm regard from indonesiaThank you @jeronimorubio thank you @adsactly