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RE: ADSactly Poetry - “I Love You More”

in #adsactly6 years ago

Good topic to talk about friend "LOVE", I read all the posts of the community of @adsactly, but with this one in particular I felt identified since I write poems songs, which I would like to share with the whole community of steemit, but I have just less than 70 scarce followers, which is why I would like to join the community of writers of @adsactly.

Love is like a fantasy, love I simply define as the ability to make someone happy, that through it you are happy!!

Now I'll leave you a poem of my own, my friend, that I titled.

THE NAVIGATOR IN YOUR EYES

I am the navigator who never ceases to be lost in your gaze
That pretty, beautiful, maybe a little off-key look,
That look I've condemned myself to look at
That same look that condemns me to love for life,
Because your gaze is an island, an island that as a sailor I will never marry.
Because of all the seas your look is the best sea because everything is different from there
I don't need to understand it, you don't, we just need to live it and enjoy it,
I hope you never tire of me sailing in your eyes leaving its wake in your veins,
Because you're my north and that's the direction I'm setting my sails.
To quench our cravings, because I'm still the NAVIGATOR OF YOUR EYES.

Thank you my friend, I hope you can continue to share your poetry with us, I would like to know

What are the requirements to join the @adsactly community?

Greetings from Venezuela friend, I support you and follow all your post!!

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Thank you so much for your very kind words and this special poem @linoo36. Always share the love in any way you can. Nice poem. Have a blessed day.