A beautiful and moving story, @chuchboy. Structures a sensitive story from memory and evocation. The discurrent thought of Dimma, a character whose sentiment is only known through her words, envelops us in her delicate evocation (the image of her feet bathed in seawater on the shore is excellent) to face us with a loss (and, in a way, a failure of love). The mechanism of the inner monologue in combination with the third-person narrative is very well worked out, as is the emotional tenor of the whole story. The opportunity vanished like water in the sand, but with a dramatic ending. I appreciate your post, @churhboy, and @adsactly for promoting it.
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Your comments always flow like river water to the sea and it is a pleasure to read from you. No one could have captured the story better. Thank you.