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RE: ADSactly Short Stories - The Other Side of the Coin

in #adsactly7 years ago

A story with a nice plot. You only get to know Saka is schizophrenic at the end. You are a very good writer however you need to work on your tenses. The story is easy to understand but with a little improvement, you will be top notch.

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Thanks for the kind compliments.