Next time I write a story, permit me to send to you. You have made the story much more interesting than I could have. Thank you so much for your advice. Those twists would have made the story more interesting. You are a great writer. I will surely check you out. Thank you.
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You are a great writer. I upvoted your story and followed you because your talent is obvious from this piece. Don't let my criticism discourage you, I'm just trying to get you to look at your stories from different angles. All the best!
Oh, I appreciate it. It is so rare that someone would read a story here on Steemit and offer such unique perspective. Thank you for that and for the support.