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RE: ADSactly Short Story - The Endless List

in #adsactly6 years ago

The customs of some cultures are often complicated and incomprehensible, however I see that in this story, in addition to the rituals that must be fulfilled in part and part, there is a very important aspect is that love is present. After all, the beautiful ending tells us that it was worth waiting patiently and fulfilling the requirements. I loved the last sentence: They both danced with arms linked to receive the blessings of both families. Neji was filled with pride as he looked at the beauty in his arm and he never looked at her differently again. Excellent story, @churchboy, congratulations!