This is a great update. It's awesome to see how well Actifit is doing, and terrific that the iOS app is out.

I do have some issues when it comes to style and grammar, and as usual, I'll cite some examples:

• "Although many already know that we've had the iOS app ready for a while now, and we gave many accounts early tester access a week ago, yet it was only the Apple approval that was delaying our official launch.." This is a clunky sentence, and a long one. Both "although" and "yet" are redundant here, and the double period at the end must be a proofreading issue. How about: "Many already know that we've had the iOS app ready for a while now, and we gave many accounts early tester access a week ago. Only Apple's approval delayed our official launch."

• "The Apple version is almost an exact copy of the Android version, with slightly minor differences, hence if you have any questions you can easily refer to the tutorial at the end of this post, check out the FAQs, read the text tutorial, or come to us with questions upon need." Again, this is way long. And could use a general sprucing up.

Here's a quick edit: "The Apple version is an almost exact copy of the Android version, with minor differences only. Therefore, if you have any questions, you can easily refer to the tutorial at the end of this post, check out the FAQs, read the text tutorial, or come to us with any questions you may have."

• "Actifit is a SMT" is wrong. Not factually, of course. Grammatically. The decision whether to use "a" or "n" before a word is not determined by the first letter of the word, but by the sound. SMT starts with a vowel sound, despite starting with a consonant. Therefore, you should use "an."

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